Well, some of the grammar needs repair, but who gives a shit. The story is great - you had me hooked many chapters ago! I hope you keep going. The interaction between captives and captor is well done, as is the courageous despair of Tara and Kara.

The predicaments are well-imagined. The fact that most of them are impossible doesn't bother me. Rather, it reminds me that this is just fantasy. I most enjoy the way you involve the girls in their own tortures - Kara's choice between being whipped or possibly strangled. Every small detail is seen to, whether it's forcing the girls to watch each other, or the electrodes attached to the whips. Very well done!

Thanks for the stories (and art).